We wrote poems all about ourself on the first line we wrote
about are personality on the next line it was how we treat others
next we wrote about things we like to do and on the last line something interesting
pls read it let me know what u think
Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
We wrote poems all about ourself on the first line we wrote
about are personality on the next line it was how we treat others
next we wrote about things we like to do and on the last line something interesting
pls read it let me know what u think
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Kia ora Chloe, I like this post because its very colourful amd it describes you, Maybe something you could work on is fullstops and capital letters!
ReplyDeleteFantastic poem Chloe! Your DLO is very eye-catching and I like how you have added your photo and the rainbow quote. The words you have selected to describe yourself are perfect and really suit you. You are now officially a blogger and I am wondering what you might post next. I will keep an eye out!
ReplyDeleteHi Chloe,
ReplyDeleteI have read your your poem. Your poem is really catchy. I have done a simlar activity like this and I enjoyed it.
What part of this activity did you enjoy?