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Friday, March 19, 2021

me me me

We wrote poems all about ourself on the first line we wrote 

about are personality on the next line it was how we treat others 

next we wrote about things we like to do and on the last line something interesting 

pls read it let   me know what u think


 

7 comments:

  1. Kia ora Chloe, I like this post because its very colourful amd it describes you, Maybe something you could work on is fullstops and capital letters!

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  2. Fantastic poem Chloe! Your DLO is very eye-catching and I like how you have added your photo and the rainbow quote. The words you have selected to describe yourself are perfect and really suit you. You are now officially a blogger and I am wondering what you might post next. I will keep an eye out!

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    1. thx miss wilkonsin i had a good comment from someone telling me what to work on. i tried pretty hard on it :) fron chloe

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  5. Hi Chloe,

    I have read your your poem. Your poem is really catchy. I have done a simlar activity like this and I enjoyed it.

    What part of this activity did you enjoy?

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