heres some sentences about the moon
hope u like it
Thursday, May 27, 2021
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Hi Chloe
ReplyDeleteit Hollie i love the way you did your background and how you describe the moon as a oversize bouncy ball i recon that is pretty cool. Maybe next time you could make your description a bit bigger. maybe next time you could could start your lines with something diffraction each time. maybe next time you could chose a diffract font.
from Hollie😁🙋
Hey, Chloe! That's a great way of describing the moon. Some people even say it's like cheese! Maybe next time you could have a different sentence starter for some other lines. Great job!
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