here is the before
and here is the after
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here is the before
and here is the after
Hello world it is me and welcome back to blog today I have done some similes.
We wrote poems all about ourself on the first line we wrote
about are personality on the next line it was how we treat others
next we wrote about things we like to do and on the last line something interesting
pls read it let me know what u think